出國留學申請書推薦（精選33篇）

出國留學申請書推薦 篇1
　　尊敬的領(lǐng)導：

　　您好！

　　我是一個天資聰穎，活潑可愛，知書達禮，善解人意，愛好廣泛，才華橫溢的有教養(yǎng)的女孩。步入成年的我即將告別我難忘驕傲的母校——遼寧省臺安縣高級中學（省級示范性高中），奔赴我心儀已久的xx大學。此時此刻，我的心情異常激動。面對夢想學校的領(lǐng)導們，我鄭重地向您介紹一下我的個人情況：

　　我自幼成長在一個書香門第。在這個大家庭中，我受到了良好的教育啟蒙，養(yǎng)成了高度的自立自強，奮發(fā)向上的生活習慣。從祖輩到父輩，書香之氣，一代勝于一代，在臺安地區(qū)小有名氣。父輩哥們成為網(wǎng)的“董氏三杰”。繼承父輩的基因，我也成為了小有名氣的文壇高手。有數(shù)十篇文章發(fā)表于等網(wǎng)絡(luò)刊物上，常常受到文聯(lián)作家協(xié)會的作家們的好評。

　　由于家父是遼寧省特級教師，所以，相對而言，我的啟蒙大學轉(zhuǎn)學手續(xù)教育就比其他同齡人優(yōu)越得多。從上小學開始，爸爸就對我實施了科學訓練。我曾是班級的班長，中隊的中隊長，少先大隊的大隊長，環(huán)保協(xié)會的會長，小記者站站長。雖說身兼數(shù)職，但絲毫沒有影響我的學業(yè)，相反卻極大地促進了我的學業(yè)。我的各科成績均名列前茅，而且愛好廣泛，體音美全面發(fā)展，薩克斯、葫蘆絲都曾是我的拿手絕活，電子報刊獲省級一等獎。多次獲得國家、省、市級書畫作品一、二等獎。值得稱道的是，在小學畢業(yè)生升學考試中，我以全縣第一名的好成績升入縣重點中學。在中學期間，歷任班級團書記兼班長，主管班級全面工作，成為班主任的得力助手。升入高中后，三年來一直擔任班級想去國外上大學的團書記，全面領(lǐng)導學生開展工作，出版報，給同學授課，學生家長會議，和國際交流學生聯(lián)誼等諸多事宜我都成為其中的主角。用老師和同學的話說：“董婷婷，你真是當年的穆桂英，陣陣少不下呀！”在學生及其家長心目中都占有矚目的地位，一舉一動具有廣泛的影響力�？梢哉f是一位不可多得的才女能人。

　　在我心中，一直有著這樣的夢想——那就是有一天能成為爸爸的學生，聆聽他的教誨，像他的學生那樣，步入理想的高校，走出國門，為臺安爭光。那些師哥師姐們常常在國外為爸爸發(fā)來問候，也常常過問我的情況。這對于我來說，是巨大的鞭策和鼓勵。我一定會盡百倍千倍的努力，實現(xiàn)我的理想。xx大學就是我目前最近的理想。

　　一流的心態(tài)造就一流的人生，理想的大學鑄就祖國的未來。我堅信，選擇我是您的明智。我會讓xx大學以我為榮，我會讓祖國母親露出欣慰的笑臉。因為未來會有一個出色的科學家董婷婷在誕生。那時，尊敬的各位領(lǐng)導，您就是伯樂，您就是共和國的功臣！你的選擇不會錯，我的未來不是夢！

　　有著深厚的文學底蘊的我，會利用我的速讀速記的本領(lǐng)，輕松地駕馭鍵盤，用我超常的智慧譜寫我輝煌的青春序曲�？茖W在發(fā)展，人才靠競爭。我愿以我的充足的個人實力挺進我心儀的xx大學，讓我們地區(qū)的更多的撥尖人才涌入xx大學，成為xx大學的后續(xù)力量，把延安精神發(fā)揚光大，讓理大大學成為共和國的脊梁支撐。

　　哪里有追求，哪里就有我；哪里有發(fā)展，哪里就有董婷婷！

　　綜上所述，我鄭重地向xx大學的各位英明決策的領(lǐng)導推薦自己，一個卓越的具有非凡潛能的董婷婷在向您招手。她會讓您看到xx大學美好的未來，她會讓xx大學校園煥發(fā)青春的風采，更會讓xx大學展示自強不息，奮發(fā)有為的新一代。

　　鴻志萬里投理工，

　　謀求發(fā)展抒豪情。

　　巾幗莫讓須眉志，

　　振興中華揚美名。

　　此致

　　敬禮！

　　申請人：

　　20xx年xx月xx日

出國留學申請書推薦 篇2
　　Dear x,

　　As long ago as I can remember I have always been fascinated by the naturalworld. That childish fascination has not left me but deepened over the years.This interest has led me to my love of biology, ecology, animal behavior andevolution.

　　Following my graduation from High School I studied Biological Sciences fortwo years at the Catholic University of Chile in Santiago. From March 20xx toNovember 20xx I was obliged to take a break from my studies at university as myfather was moving from the city to a more remote rural area. While helping myfather I was able to work closely with birds of prey among others and I wassuccessful in breeding the endangered chinchillas. During my time away fromuniversity I continued to deepen my knowledge of my subject and studiedevolutionary thinking and the biological basis of behavior. I also worked for abrief time as a translator which made me think that perhaps my English was goodenough o complete my studies in an English speaking country.

　　Since coming to Oxford and studying at OLT I have improved my writtenEnglish a great deal. I am a member of The Natural History Museum (London) andrecently attended a course called "The History of Evolution." The course wasorganized by Birkbeck Collegeand took place at the Natural History Museum inLondon each Wednesday. The course has been fascinating and has served to confirmmy suspicion that the more I learn of this subject the more I want to know.

　　I am hopeful that my previous studies in Santiago, my maturity and myexperience in this field will allow me to enter the second year of anundergraduate programme in the UK. After completing my undergraduate it is mywish to continue studying at postgraduate level and ultimately conduct my ownresearch in this area.

　　My other academic interests include Paleoanthropology, and the history anddevelopment of science. I am most interested in the writings of Darwin andThomas and Henry Huxley.

　　I am keen on fitness training, horse riding, trekking and diving. I am mostinterested in all outdoor pursuits. I am also keen to develop my newly foundskills in classical singing and dance.

　　I realize that as a non-native student I will be required to work harderthan my contemporaries and I am prepared to do that. I have a cheerful andopen-minded disposition and look forward to sharing and exploring new ideas.

　　I hope my application will be considered favorably

　　Yours sincerely,

　　

出國留學申請書推薦 篇3
　　姓名：王衛(wèi)衛(wèi)

　　電話：

　　郵箱：

　　尊敬的領(lǐng)導：

　　您好！

　　我是浙江師范大學藝術(shù)系的一名學生，即將面臨畢業(yè)。四年來，在師友的嚴格教益及個人的努力下，我具備了扎實的專業(yè)基礎(chǔ)知識，系統(tǒng)地掌握了等有關(guān)理論;熟悉涉外工作常用禮儀;具備較好的英語聽、說、讀、寫、譯等能力;能熟練操作計算機辦公軟件。同時，我利用課余時間廣泛地涉獵了大量書籍，不但充實了自己，也培養(yǎng)了自己多方面的技能。

　　此外，我還積極地參加各種社會活動，抓住每一個機會，鍛煉自己。大學四年，我深深地感受到，與優(yōu)秀學生共事，使我在競爭中獲益;向?qū)嶋H困難挑戰(zhàn)，讓我在挫折中成長。我熱愛貴單位所從事的事業(yè)，殷切地期望能夠在您的領(lǐng)導下，為這一光榮的事業(yè)添磚加瓦;并且在實踐中不斷學習、進步。隨信附上個人求職簡歷，收筆之際，鄭重地提一個小小的要求：無論您是否選擇我，尊敬的領(lǐng)導，希望您能夠接受我誠懇的謝意!

　　此致

　　敬禮!

　　申請人：王衛(wèi)衛(wèi)

　　申請時間：20__年05月

出國留學申請書推薦 篇4
　　Dear x,

　　To Whom It May Concern: As the Dean of Stonewell College, I have had the pleasure of knowing Hannah Smith for the last four years. She has been a tremendous student and an asset to our school. I would like to take this opportunity to recommend Hannah for your graduate program. I feel confident that she will continue to succeed in her studies. Hannah is a dedicated student and thus far her grades have been exemplary. In class, she has proven to be a take-charge person who is able to successfully develop plans and implement them. Hannah has also assisted us in our admissions office. She has successfully demonstrated leadership ability by counseling new and prospective students.

　　Her advice has been a great help to these students, many of whom have taken time to share their comments with me regarding her pleasant and encouraging attitude. It is for these reasons that I offer high recommendations for Hannah without reservation. Her drive and abilities will truly be an asset to your establishment. If you have any questions regarding this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me. Sincerely, Roger Fleming Dean of Stonewell College .

　　Yours sincerely,

　　

出國留學申請書推薦 篇5
　　尊敬的學校領(lǐng)導、老師：

　　我是現(xiàn)就讀于xx大學xx級xx學院xx班的學生，現(xiàn)因出國留學（休學原因）無法按時參加學習，需要休學時間（休學時間），即從xx年xx月xx日至xx年xx月xx日。

　　望領(lǐng)導及老師能夠予以批準。

　　申請人家長意見：

　　父：

　　母：

　　申請人：

　　20xx年x月x日

出國留學申請書推薦 篇6
　　尊敬的x大學老師領(lǐng)導：

　　您好!首先感謝您能在百忙之中抽出時間審視我的申請材料!

　　我是x市高級中學理科實驗班的x，和其他的同胞或者說是競爭者們一樣，我也但愿通過貴校的自主招生來實現(xiàn)我一直以來的夢想考入x大學。

　　在眾多高校中，唯有x大學深深吸引了我，而且我也聽到x的學長說，x非常適合那些“有想法主意”的人，只要你有想法主意，x都會盡全力幫你實現(xiàn)，我覺得我就是那種有想法主意、有立異意識的人，這也使我更加堅定了“將來一定要到x讀書”的決心。憑借著十幾年如一日的努力，我的成績一直名列前茅，中考更是以全市第二十八的成績考入鐵嶺市重點高中理科實驗班。到了高中，我并沒有驕傲，而是更加努力的學習，成績也有了進一步的奔騰，每次考試成績均不亂在年級前十名，施展好時還會進入前五名，我堅信自己是有資格進入x大學的。

　　相信在此之前，您已經(jīng)閱讀過了無數(shù)的自薦信，對省、市三好學生，校學生會主席，團支部書記等也已經(jīng)見怪不怪了。很可惜，這些刺眼的榮譽和職位我都沒有，我有的是對x全面的了解，有的是對x始終如一的熱愛與向往，有的是“非x不去”的勇氣與決心。更重要的是，我有著老實、量力而行的品質(zhì)，我不會為了得到您的青睞而強調(diào)事實，虛張聲勢，而且我覺得一個人的領(lǐng)導能力、組織能力、交際能力和協(xié)調(diào)能力并不是只有靠這些職位才能體現(xiàn)出來的，究竟校學生會主席只有一個，但具有多地方能力的高中生遠不止這些。

　　做事堅決，善于籌劃是我的另一長處。說到籌劃，我對自己的`未來也已經(jīng)做好了初步的打算：近年來，跟著中國經(jīng)濟的起飛，汽車已經(jīng)走入了平常庶民家。因為汽車產(chǎn)業(yè)的提高，這地方精英的需求量也在隨之增長。這對從小酷愛汽車，7歲就能識別數(shù)十種車標的我，無疑是一種巨大的激勵，我也勵志將來要進入一家汽車企業(yè)，介入設(shè)計制造一部機能優(yōu)異，而且安全節(jié)能的汽車。據(jù)我所知，現(xiàn)今中國汽車在發(fā)念頭的節(jié)油耐用，不亂機能上仍有一定的進步空間，而伴跟著油價的提高，增壓直噴等技術(shù)也已走下神壇，進入乘用領(lǐng)域。在車身結(jié)構(gòu)地方，人們對于安全恬靜的追求是無止境的，所以有了碰撞吸能設(shè)計，有了更優(yōu)秀的懸架，有了鋁材，甚至碳纖維的應用。我愿把我全部的精力都投入到這些領(lǐng)域中，讓中國的汽車有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞臺上。這一切看似虛幻的夢想，一旦進入x，就都很有可能變?yōu)楝F(xiàn)實。

　　此致

　　敬禮!

　　申請人：

　　xx年xx月xx日

出國留學申請書推薦 篇7
　　Dear ,

　　A Chinese graduate student of composite materials, I would like to pursuePh. D. studies in a program in which I can do advanced inter-disciplinaryresearch that is built upon my expertise in both chemical engineering andcomposite materials. I find that your program is one of the few where suchresearch is possible.

　　I am due to complete my Master's studies next year at the Beijing Instituteof Light Industry, a well-respected higher-learning institution that has servedas a major cradle of engineering talents for light industries in this country.Majoring in structural mechanics of composites, I have focused my studies onhoneycomb sandwich and its applications for civilian purposes. Although I didnot take many of the traditional undergraduate courses in this field, mygraduate studies have proceeded well. Building on my extensive workingexperience with all kinds of materials, I have completed a host of projects, aslisted in the Appendix, that are not only technologically advanced but alsocommercially profitable. My research has been highly commended by theschool.

　　To accomplish what I have accomplished, I have had to be more intelligentand overcome more difficulties than most of my classmates, for I did not get toreceive a regular undergraduate education. Although I performed strongly in the1988 National University Entrance Examinations and met the requirements foruniversity acceptance, I did not craft a good enough strategy in applying to theuniversities. As a result, my application fell through cracks, leaving me onlythe opportunity to study in a two-year college program, not to be discouraged bythis mishap, I studied with diligence and creativity, and succeeded in firmlygrounding myself in the studies of material propensities and structures. When Icompleted that program, I was as capable as most graduates from the honorsprogram in handling practical material problems from the angle of chemistry.

　　Upon graduation in 1990,I first took up the job of an assistant engineer ina biochemistry pharmaceutical manufacturer, where I was in charge of thedevelopment and analysis of several lines of products. I was given theresponsibility for VD Calcium Tablet in the first two weeks, as I demonstratedthat I was able to do independent research, particularly in terms ofquantitative analysis and microbiology inspection, from five raw materials tosemi-made and finished products. As my talents showed up, I took charge of theproduction and inspection of more and more products. Towards the end of 1991, Iwas awarded the honor of Excellent Employee in the factory of almost twothousand people in recognition of my contribution to its business.

　　Armed with the ability to quickly grasp the essence of new things, I madeeven more contribution to my second employer, a Joint-Venture Company ofcosmetics. In this company, In the first two months after I was hired, Iestablished, with reference to both the ISO and national standards,. Thecompany's standards of packaging materials for 35 different products fromcorrugated box to paper lid, from glass bottle to plastic cover. During thefirst half year, I turned myself from just a user of cosmetics to qualityengineer of cosmetic actively engaged in R. & D. Three new products (ElyseeVitamin E Cream, Elysee Tonique and Elysee Lipbalm) I helped to develop wererecognized as Provincial Scientific Achievements, for which I was conferredthree certificates of Honor. I believe that when one embarks on a new career, heshould be quick in accepting changes even though he must still stick to his oldprinciples.

　　In these six years of working experience, I greatly improved myself interms of technological expertise. I made chemical and microbiologicalexaminations of different drugs skillfully and independently, successfullydeveloped several new types of cosmetics, some of which merited the designationof Provincial Scientific Achievements. But more importantly, I learned to askmore sophisticated questions and then answer them.

　　The years of being an engineer has taught me how to be a person. I learnedto be both a team leader and a team player. Working in conjunction with others,I have always held onto the principle of being honest, modest and helpful toothers, whether I was just a technician, an engineer or even the assistant tothe general manager. I enjoy working with other people. I have been well likedby my colleagues. At the farewell parties for me, some of my friends were soreluctant to say goodbye to me that they would burst into tears.

　　While working for the Chinese factory, I was once "borrowed" by a collegeto teach there as an adjunct instructor for half a year. During those months, Ioften worked late to check students' work and prepare for the next day'sclasses. I believe that this teaching experience will serve me well should yoube able to offer me the position of a teaching assistant.

　　At the graduate school, I have met new challenges the old way. I firstacquired a profound understanding of the basic concepts and theories ofmechanics (theoretical and material ones), and then applied the fundamentals tomy major: composites. As you can see from the from the transcripts of academicrecord, this approach paid off. My first academic article Honeycomb SandwichComposite will be published in the second edition of the Journal of BeijingInstitute of Light Industry of 1998. Now I am writing my Master's Degree thesis,in which I shall compare the mechanical properties of corrugated cores andhoneycomb cores, analyze the outstanding characters of the latter, establish thestandards of civil-use honeycomb fiberboard, and consider the marketing futureof honeycomb fiberboard.

　　I am confident that the combination of my extensive working experience andmy solid academic training has adequately prepared me for advanced studies in mychosen field of specialty in your distinguished program. To undertake suchstudies, I have learned English well, so well that I was appointed first theEnglish secretary to the factory's director and then the assistant to thejoint-venture's general manager. In these positions, I dealt with internationalvisitors and handled English documents. Such English proficiency should prove agreat advantage to me once I am enrolled in your program.

　　Although I am now focusing my academic interests on composite materials,you may find that I may be more suitable for other majors. If so, I wouldgreatly appreciate it if you could advise me accordingly.

　　The following is a list of the research work I have undertaken under theguidance of my advisor (mostly in the area of industrial applications ofcomposites):

　　Yours sincerely,

　　

出國留學申請書推薦 篇8
　　Dear x,

　　I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast，I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations，depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms，or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor，who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch，such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.

　　In contrast，foreign enterprises tend to welcome employees who have theability to make decisions on their own，though the extent to which this is truedepends on whether the supervisor is a local Chinese or an expatriate. Theseorganizat Applied Program：Organizational Behavior

　　The purpose behind this personal statement is to not only gain admission toyour well-established and highly respected Ph.D. program，but to impress uponyou my passion for learning and my tremendous desire to succeed in bothscholastic research and in teaching on the professional level. I have based mydecision to pursue an academic career not on purely practical reasons，butrather on my own natural interests and aptitude. My personal philosophy is thatmoney and social status should not be pursued as life-consuming objectives andthat in actuality they are the by-products of goals originating from one's innerneeds. I understand that my intellectual capacity is a gift，and I intend to usethis gift to the very best of my substantial capabilities.

　　I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast，I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations，depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms，or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor，who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch，such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　

出國留學申請書推薦 篇9
　　Dear sir / madam,

　　Hello, my name is， University teacher. I am also very pleased torecommend to you my students ，and believe that it can be a good completionof your masters courses in your school.

　　Ever since he entered the University, he has often shown maturity andstability. Since most of the students in the class are from other provinces andcities, the experience of leaving home for the first time makes it necessary forthem to take a long time to adapt to the new environment. But I have noticedthat, by contrast, adjusted quickly and actively involved in the newenvironment.

　　There is a big difference between the curriculum of the University and themiddle school, and the emphasis is on the ability of self-study. Therefore, infreshman, sophomore, a lot of students have shown varying degrees of adaptation,do not know how to learn the University curriculum. However, students have astrong ability to adapt, quickly find out the key business management courses,in a very short time to master the learning methods, and other teachers said heis very strong ability to accept new knowledge, new knowledge that hell be ableto digest, can be understood.

　　It can be said that some of the students in the class is holding a verygood college entrance examination scores into our school, and by virtue ofhis strong self-learning ability and good learning methods. This, in eachsemester final exam has been well reflected, especially excellent achievementsin professional English in the final exam, the class is a smooth through the 46English exam students. His passion and determination to learn English is to moveme most.

　　In addition to the study of students in the school football players,actively participate in the activities of the school organization, strongorganization and leadership. He often comes to my office or give me a call, hemet together to discuss the problems in study and life, hope to get bettergrades in the. said the students is a good student.

　　I hope your school can give him a chance, let him in your school rigorousstudy style and good learning environment to continue to develop his expertise,further improve professional knowledge, broaden their horizons. Look at yourschool to consider its application.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming

出國留學申請書推薦 篇10
　　Dear ,

　　My interest in young children first began my niece was born while my sisterwas still living with us. On a daily basis I would help care for the baby and Igained a large sense of my responsibility over those four years. Due to this, Ihave had a growing aspiration to work with young children. I feel that the firstfew years of a baby’s life need numerous positive role models. I have chosen toapply for this course because I consider myself to be a very maternal person andI believe this work to be enormously rewarding. Therefore I am expecting topursue a career with young children, preferably those aged from birth to 5years.

　　I undertook work experience for Liverpool City Council working in thePlanning and Building Control Department for a fortnight during March 20__. Icarried out general administration including, filing, photocopying, faxing andanswering phone calls. I feel this has developed my organisational andcommunication skills. In addition to this, I enhanced my computer literacy byperforming data entry tasks, printing, using the intranet and typing letters.This experience has helped me to work independently and to use my initiativewhen required.

　　Throughout summer 20__ I worked as a volunteer at Sefton Resource Centrefor young people with disabilities. I worked with young children ranging fromages 3 to 8. I embarked on necessary training needed to care for the children inaccordance to their disability and age. During this experience my sense ofresponsibility increased. This was because I had to keep watch of at least twochildren who, because of their disability, had no real sense of danger. As wellas this, I feel that I now have a greater amount of empathy for the parentsbecause I had experienced only a few hours a week of their primaryresponsibility and their children’s need for dependency.教育學個人陳述#e#

　　I was assigned one child each day in which I was expected to take fullresponsibility for, this would be during trips to places such as the swimmingbaths and even when on site. Although I found this to be difficult on someoccasions, I enjoyed it and I formed a strong bond with a fair few of thechildren.

　　I am currently applying for voluntary work experience for multiple othernurseries within Liverpool, those including The Little Georgian Day Nursery inthe City Centre and put in another application for Sefton Resource Centre.SinceI can remember, I have always had an understanding of those with disabilities.My cousin has moderate learning difficulties which has a large affect on hermental age; I frequently visit her and find that I enjoy being in her company asshe is a very optimistic person. Furthermore, one of my close friends previouslystarred in a documentary for BBC 3’s Beauty Season which was centred aroundsociety’s perceptions of beauty, as she has lived with Apert syndrome she hasexperienced many feelings of seclusion and situations of negativity, such asbullying. I found that these situations made her a stronger person and myfriends and I have helped her through her recovery from over 20 operations. Ihave high expectations and a large amount of respect for her and every otherperson who suffers from physical or mental disabilities. I was previously amember of Liverpool’s Team Oasis at Greenbank Sports Academy in which Iparticipated in performing arts activities, such as acting, dancing and singing.From this I gained confidence and was able to improve my speaking skills, whichhas helped me speak in front of large audiences with ease. This has proven to beuseful when doing a school assembly for years seven and eight explaining theimportance of recycling and keeping the environment green.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　

出國留學申請書推薦 篇11
　　Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were…(有刪節(jié))

　　合理地闡述了申請者學習電子工程的動機，學習動機是評審委員非�？粗械�。同時，讀了這段文字，會使讀者沉浸在對童年往事的美好回憶里，借此打動評審委員的心。

　　另外一篇修改過的文章開頭用詩一般的語言寫道(有刪節(jié)):

　　……I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, “What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!” As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.

　　結(jié)尾呼應了開頭，闡述了作者為什么要去美國讀書:

　　I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another pa age leaped out: “She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries… Maria took the trainWarsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca.”

出國留學申請書推薦 篇12
　　尊敬的領(lǐng)導：

　　您好！

　　我是浙江師范大學藝術(shù)系的一名學生，即將面臨畢業(yè)。四年來，在師友的嚴格 教益及個人的努力下，我具備了扎實的專業(yè)基礎(chǔ)知識，系統(tǒng)地掌握了等有關(guān)理論;熟悉 涉外工作常用禮儀;具備較好的英語聽、說、讀、寫、譯等能力;能熟練操作計算機辦公 軟件。同時，我利用課余時間廣泛地涉獵了大量書籍，不但充實了自己，也培養(yǎng)了自 己多方面的技能。

　　此外，我還積極地參加各種社會活動，抓住每一個機會，鍛煉自己。大學四年，我 深深地感受到，與優(yōu)秀學生共事，使我在競爭中獲益;向?qū)嶋H困難挑戰(zhàn)，讓我在挫折中 成長。我熱愛貴單位所從事的事業(yè)，殷切地期望能夠在您的領(lǐng)導下，為這一光榮的事業(yè) 添磚加瓦;并且在實踐中不斷學習、進步。隨信附上個人求職簡歷，收筆之際，鄭重地提 一個小小的要求：無論您是否選擇我，尊敬的領(lǐng)導，希望您能夠接受我誠懇的謝意!

　　此致

　　敬禮！

　　申請人：

　　日期：xx年xx月xx日

出國留學申請書推薦 篇13
　　尊敬的領(lǐng)導：

　　您好！

　　我是浙江師范大學藝術(shù)系的一名學生，即將面臨畢業(yè)。四年來，在師友的嚴格教益及個人的努力下，我具備了扎實的專業(yè)基礎(chǔ)知識，系統(tǒng)地掌握了等有關(guān)理論;熟悉涉外工作常用禮儀;具備較好的英語聽、說、讀、寫、譯等能力;能熟練操作計算機辦公軟件。同時，我利用課余時間廣泛地涉獵了大量書籍，不但充實了自己，也培養(yǎng)了自己多方面的'技能。

　　此外，我還積極地參加各種社會活動，抓住每一個機會，鍛煉自己。大學四年，我深深地感受到，與優(yōu)秀學生共事，使我在競爭中獲益;向?qū)嶋H困難挑戰(zhàn)，讓我在挫折中成長。我熱愛貴單位所從事的事業(yè)，殷切地期望能夠在您的領(lǐng)導下，為這一光榮的事業(yè)添磚加瓦;并且在實踐中不斷學習、進步。隨信附上個人求職簡歷，收筆之際，鄭重地提一個小小的要求：無論您是否選擇我，尊敬的領(lǐng)導，希望您能夠接受我誠懇的謝意!

　　此致

　　敬禮！

　　申請人：

　　申請時間：20xx年05月

出國留學申請書推薦 篇14
　　尊敬的老師：

　　您好!

　　我是中國的一名大學本科生，就讀上海大學經(jīng)濟系。自20__年起，我關(guān)注世界大學的排名及各個學校的優(yōu)勢，產(chǎn)生了出國留學的念頭，從小時候就聽過劍橋大學。

　　劍橋大學的工商管理專業(yè)是全球非常知名的專業(yè)，同時本專業(yè)培養(yǎng)具備管理、經(jīng)濟、法律及企業(yè)管理方面的知識和能力，能在企、事業(yè)單位及政府部門從事管理以及教學、科研方面工作的工商管理學科高級專門人才。

　　所以我渴望加入到劍橋大學工商管理專業(yè)的'研究生行列中。在全球經(jīng)濟一體化進程中，中國將進一步帶動國內(nèi)市場經(jīng)濟的繁榮，拓展中國市場，缺乏現(xiàn)代管理理念指導的中國傳統(tǒng)企業(yè)將面臨嚴峻的挑戰(zhàn)。所以中國的經(jīng)濟發(fā)展需要這樣的人才。

　　在大學期間，我勤奮刻苦，認真學習，注重培養(yǎng)自己嚴謹?shù)目茖W態(tài)度及獨立的創(chuàng)新能力，力求學有專精，學以致用，經(jīng)過大學本科三年多的學習，各科都取得了優(yōu)異的成績。因此，我一定能很好地完成留學課程。學成回國后，我一定能實現(xiàn)從事工商管理工作的愿望，并能在這事業(yè)上實現(xiàn)我的人生價值。

　　申請人：

　　年 月 日

出國留學申請書推薦 篇15
　　Respectful Sir or Madam，

　　I‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I’m very glad to hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. That‘s really good news for me. And I am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explain way I want to apply for a scholarship. My name is Haoyu Liu. I’m 17 years old and I‘m a fresh man in Taiyuan No.2 Foreign Language High School. I’m very proud of as one of my school. I‘m diligent and I know I must be a useful person. So I always tell myself that I have to learn more and more. I’m also very outgoing and I like to help people as possible as I can. That‘s way I got many friends. I was born in Jixian，a small county with poor land and terrible weather. My parents were farming at home. Even life doesn’t easy，I still hopeful enough. I still love my hometown and I want to do something for my country. So I want to learn more knowledge as possible as I can. I know how hard people‘s life. So I want to change it by myself. That’s way I‘m diligent and I like to help people. But when I went to high school，our life got worst. My parents can’t afford my tuition. So my father went to Taiyuan to find a job. And we have to rent a little house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown. But I still keep my faith，because I know that my family will support me to let my dream come true forever. When I got the information that I can be an exchange student，I was exciting but confusing. I really want to go to German to study but I don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. So I’m writing this letter to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I wish I can do better just because I have a dream that I can change my family，my hometown even my country. I hope I can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. At school，I‘m a good student. I’m interested about sports，arts and science. I also like to study foreign language. That‘s way I chose to study German and English at school. I noticed that language can let me communicate with others easily. But I can’t only study language. I have to know about the Germanic culture clearly. That‘s way I need to be an exchange student this time. But I need your trust. I need a scholarship of your school，because I’m a good student. I have a dream. In that dream，I can see my parents are smiling because I became a useful person. I can see my teachers are smiling when I came back from German. My will is strong. And I know I can do better when I go to German. So I‘m writing to you to apply a scholarship. And I’m waiting for your return. Thank you for your kind heart and reading my letter.

　　Best wishes.

　　Haoyu Liu

出國留學申請書推薦 篇16
　　Dear x,

　　I am pleased to write this letter for my former student Miss Nan Li,whograduated from this College with an L.B.degree in June 1978.Miss Li was admittedto the Department of Law of this College in 1974 through highly competitiveentrance examination whi ch is conducted annually and is open to the wholenation.Even in such aselective group.Miss Li made herself distinguished.

　　Asprofessor and dean of the College,I have access to her records of academic workand moral conduct,In her fourth year study,I instructed her in Anglo-AmericanLaws on Trespass.So Ihave known her quite well.Miss Li''s performance,like thatin many other courses she taken,was excellent with asuperior grade of 86 for thefirst semester,and 84 for the second semester.In our university and in otheruniversity here,80 is considered"A",the highest level.As far as Iknow,Miss Liwishes to continue her study in Law for an advanced degree.I am sure she has hadsufficient prerequisite knowledge for the subject and certainly has the abilityto undertake the study.

　　I recommend Miss Li without reservation and shallappreciate your favorable consideration of her application.